Friday, April 05, 2024

Tone Deaf and Dumbfounded

 

My love is like a partridge or a squab.

I tried to make that work, but she resisted.

This was a compliment, so I insisted;

But she, it seemed, was something of a snob.


She wanted peacocks. Lord, she wanted tits

With scarlet crests and wings of diamante

To fly ahead and trill of shantih, shantih.

Still I preferred to sing my greatest hits,


Honor roll of the commonplace, the same,

Sparkly in dun. Dressed down. The sure. The daily.

Nothing about me said, I love you gaily.

She flew in neon on a darkling plane.


And so I write to you from this far place,

Who misses most a hypothetic face.

1 comment:

Renee Winter said...

Love the whimsy and the rhyming.